Before EditProof Edits
✘No Narrative ✘Wordy ✘Grammar and punctuation errors ✘Bad flow ✘Scattered topics ✘Unnecessary sentences ✘No theme ✘Weak intro and ending ✘Poor word choice ✘Lacks creativity ✘No structure
After EditProof Edits
✔ Creative narrative added ✔ Body and conclusion improved ✔ Concepts and theme refined and tied together ✔Improved word choice and sentence structure ✔ All errors corrected. ✔ ✔ ✔ Essay transformed. ★Applicant was accepted!★